Wednesday 27 December 2017

Book review: 16 and pregnant with twins


*** out of 5

This is an OK book, it just seems very confusing in parts and there are jumps in time as well as making me confused about who was talking and to whom.

It's an easy read, it could just have done with going through some professional editing and the POV changes were weird too.  Keep writing, Elisabeth, just be prepared to go through more editing before your next book is published... sorry!

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