Barefoot by Marnesha Augustine
⭐⭐ out of 5
The author also concentrates more on the adults POV rather than the child's which wouldn't interest a child at all... picture books need to be focussed on the child main character, about things children are interested in and talking in a child's language.
It's focussed on an adult main character, trying to educate the child rather than having a child main character wanting to learn about something. A child wouldn't get past the first page before getting so bored that they don't want to listen to any more.
It's a good idea, just very poorly thought out and in need of being more than double the length.
Sorry.
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